The objective:
Show us a scene from your current project. It can be creepy, adventurous, romantic, etc. Just a snippet to let readers see what they're in for!
The guidelines:
* Must be from a current work-in-progress (WIP). Nothing already published.
* You may choose from any section of the manuscript, but be mindful not to include spoilers.
* Keep it clean and YA audience friendly, please. No erotica.
* Stay under 300 words or about one page. It can be as little as a few lines if you prefer. We just want to give readers a chance to see everyone's selection.
* Link back to Chirenjenzie to enjoy others' work as well!
Here is an excerpt from one of my more recent WIPs titled Tinheart.
I stared through the window as raindrops trailed
in rivulets down the glass. A peal of thunder echoed across the sky, masking the
professor's monotone voice. I sighed again, wishing I were anywhere else but
physics class.
"Miss Harper?" Professor Whipple
questioned, her tone rising. "Miss Harper!"
I straightened in my seat, my leg numb and
tingling viciously against the soft leather. "Yes, ma'am?"
"Where is the steam sphere in relation to
the energy orb?" she demanded.
I pursed my lips in thought and frantically
searched my subconscious for the answer Whipple wanted. What was she droning on
about today? Trajectory? Magnetism? Defeat settling in my stomach, I swallowed
hard and offered up an answer. "Tw-twice the distance?"
Half the class snickered; the other half just
shook their heads.
Heat prickle beneath the rigid laced collar of
my uniform. Whipple stood, spindly hands on her hips, and stared back with
unusually bright eyes. A coil chip flashed where there should've been pupils.
I bit down on my tongue, knowing every second of my humiliation was being
documented for all the committee to see. Stupid droids and their inconvenient
technology. Why couldn't the school go back to using humans to teach?
"Miss Walker?" Whipple turned her head
directly and focused on the leggy redhead sitting just to my left. "Can you tell me where the steam sphere in
relation to the energy orb since Lawren clearly doesn't know?"
I scoffed. How was it a pile of rusty parts
could use sarcasm?
Happy writing.
I soooo want to read this now!
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! Please keep writing :))
ReplyDeleteThis is aaaawesome, Izzie!!!! Write. Faster!!!!
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